Hello!My name is Gan xirui My English name is Libby.I Meghit. I come from Ma Jiang xing shan primary school.I?m in Class Two Grade five.Im a Chinese boy. I l ike English very much . There are three people in my family. They are my father my mother and I\'\'I have a happy family.I love my family.Now l\'\'ll talk about my hometown to you.My hometown is in Ma jiang. lt\'\'s a beautiful place. lt has many tall buildings and wide streets . There are trees and fowers everywhere. There is a Qing Shui Jiang River and Shui Luo Tan Wany people come to visit them every year. The people here are very friendly and helpful l love my hometown very muchtoo.Weicome to my hometown—ma jiang gui zhou! l think you\'\'ll like it!

名師點評：小作者這篇英語作文總體上寫得還是不錯的，小作者在文中介紹了自己、自己的家人和家鄉，讓讀者對小作者有了一些了解。小作者還突出了家庭的溫馨和家鄉人民的友善，可見小作者的英語表達能力還是不錯的。不過文章也有幾處筆誤，另外，有些標點不規范，小作者還要更仔細一些。

“IlikeEnglishverymuch”改為“IlikeEnglishverymuch”。“Wanypeoplecometovisitthemeveryyear”中的“Wany”改為“Many”。“Weicometomyhometown”中的“Weicome”改為“Welcome”。

另外，既然是演講稿，那么演講的主題是什么呢？如果能給文章擬個題目就比較完整了。